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Against The Wall
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Literature Text
Pause.
There is a feeling here.
Something words fall before.
the way you breathe
the way you talk
the way you
f e e l
Slow.
I caress your side slowly,
as if it were burning porcelain.
your breath hitches
your breath slows
your breath
g a s p s
Go.
Even as I inch towards
your elegant frame, I hesitate.
something in your eyes
something in your smile
something in your
l i p s
Stuck.
Claimed by ethereal bonds
beyond what physical can discuss.
~~
exeunt.
~~
a change in pace
the moment the virus
annihilates the gland
the fever runs rampant,
burning in blissful fire.
i have never
imagined a feeling
so real careening, scraping
at the edges of the highest of
precipice. Out with haste, we spiral
hand in hand leading the charge of the light
brigade – on! on! into the breach, into sacrificial fire, into
t h i s
~~
less than three
~~
Moment.
Clasping the trophy of your
love, I hold it to my chest.
like a warm hand
like a warm breast
like a warm
h e a r t.
There is a feeling here.
Something words fall before.
the way you breathe
the way you talk
the way you
f e e l
Slow.
I caress your side slowly,
as if it were burning porcelain.
your breath hitches
your breath slows
your breath
g a s p s
Go.
Even as I inch towards
your elegant frame, I hesitate.
something in your eyes
something in your smile
something in your
l i p s
Stuck.
Claimed by ethereal bonds
beyond what physical can discuss.
~~
exeunt.
~~
a change in pace
the moment the virus
annihilates the gland
the fever runs rampant,
burning in blissful fire.
i have never
imagined a feeling
so real careening, scraping
at the edges of the highest of
precipice. Out with haste, we spiral
hand in hand leading the charge of the light
brigade – on! on! into the breach, into sacrificial fire, into
t h i s
~~
less than three
~~
Moment.
Clasping the trophy of your
love, I hold it to my chest.
like a warm hand
like a warm breast
like a warm
h e a r t.
Is it the fall that kills you or the anticipation, I wonder? Enjoy.
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I really like this, I like how you've structured the poem in this way. Very unique.
Otherwise, brilliant poem!
Otherwise, brilliant poem!